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Baby On Board
A drunk man sees a young couple throw a baby off the ferry dock.
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A drunk man sees a young couple throw a baby off the ferry dock.
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Comments About Baby On Board 1
MattyMustng on 02/07/2011
Do people not understand internal dialogue?