Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to...
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Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to writing,"giving up" is not an option. Good luck to all of us.
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A review of When We Fell - first draftby stevles on 09/08/2014"When We Fell" is kind of a schizophrenic read. The action sequences, both at the beginning and end of the story are fast-paced, riveting and beautifully written. Dialogue early on matches the drama. It's when we get back home in the States where things begin to fall apart. Ben's romance with Jude is too forced and schmaltzy to be believed. Harry and Katie? Is every blue-collar... read
A review of Rise of the Crimson Sunby stevles on 08/09/2014Written as half novel and half screenplay, Rise of the Crimson Sun isn't half bad. However, the bad, (the last 3rd of the story) drags a very good and well-written script into the ground. The super-humanized Matthew, the introduction of all new characters, trying to make sense of the madness through sophomoric philosophical discourse, Ana's needless death, the ambiguous (to... read
A review of 3 Daysby stevles on 07/01/2014I'd like to get the typos out of the way, first. Passenger doo for "door", (pg. 24) I'm know for "I", (pg.32) Loose sleep for "lose", (pg. 45) He is wears, for he wears, (pg.49) Character names BRAVO 3, 4, etc., include the month SEPTEMBER. Make it "pass" for pay, (pg. 87) There are several others sprinkled throughout the last 27 pages, but... well, you get the idea. Finally,... read