stevles 

member since 11/11/2002 | last login 07/09/2014

Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to...

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Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to writing,"giving up" is not an option. Good luck to all of us.

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Reviews by stevles 127

  • A review of 3 Days
    by stevles on 07/01/2014
    I'd like to get the typos out of the way, first. Passenger doo for "door", (pg. 24) I'm know for "I", (pg.32) Loose sleep for "lose", (pg. 45) He is wears, for he wears, (pg.49) Character names BRAVO 3, 4, etc., include the month SEPTEMBER. Make it "pass" for pay, (pg. 87) There are several others sprinkled throughout the last 27 pages, but... well, you get the idea. Finally,... read
  • by stevles on 06/10/2014
    The Devil's Lullaby has elements, make that tributes to two well-known horror films. The Exorcist is the first that comes to mind and the Candyman is the second. I'm sure if I thought about it long and hard, a few other faves would pop into my head. Firstly, the very last scene with Jade and the child (from the Ellen Burstyn film "Resurrection") is first-rate. The ambiguity... read
  • A review of Sher Singh Rev.
    by stevles on 05/27/2014
    Firstly, dialogue and character are outstanding. Every one of importance to the story rings true with his/her own clear and distinguishable voice. Their strengths/weaknesses, good/bad traits, and unfulfilled desires are nicely captured and easily understood by the reader. Other aspects of the story; however, do not fare as well. While immersed in the reading, I was taken... read
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Comments About stevles 17

  • kamalkrishan on 05/27/2014

    Hi Stevles,
    Thank You for reviewing Sher Singh and your valuable suggestions.

    Best Wishes.
  • theauthor on 05/22/2014

    Good to see one coming back to the grind here at TSL. I really appreciate your review. It's a bit challenging to run Rivers all over the country and not have a lot of characters. I'm glad you like my style. I am working on making it easier for readers to keep up with the action, but I don't want to dilute the difficulty of the challenges. If I were British, I would set this into a Sherlock three-episode season. 'Toby' is mentioned to be a fake name along with others. I'm torn about the flashbacks. I may need to post a version without them and see. Someone will say, "I want to know about his past." I wrote a past to my characters. The next version has more of Anna's past and a bit more of Rivers too. Thanks for the suggestions.
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