Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to...
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Have been an avid movie fan all my life. With Russ LaValle, a friend and writing partner, I've come very close to selling two scripts. But, as we all know, close is "no cigar." Like all of you, when it comes to writing,"giving up" is not an option. Good luck to all of us.
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A review of 3 Daysby stevles on 07/01/2014I'd like to get the typos out of the way, first. Passenger doo for "door", (pg. 24) I'm know for "I", (pg.32) Loose sleep for "lose", (pg. 45) He is wears, for he wears, (pg.49) Character names BRAVO 3, 4, etc., include the month SEPTEMBER. Make it "pass" for pay, (pg. 87) There are several others sprinkled throughout the last 27 pages, but... well, you get the idea. Finally,... read
A review of Sher Singh Rev.by stevles on 05/27/2014Firstly, dialogue and character are outstanding. Every one of importance to the story rings true with his/her own clear and distinguishable voice. Their strengths/weaknesses, good/bad traits, and unfulfilled desires are nicely captured and easily understood by the reader. Other aspects of the story; however, do not fare as well. While immersed in the reading, I was taken... read
A review of Albumology (New Reprise)by stevles on 05/11/2014How do you try to get a fresh take on an old idea? You mix a couple of genres together and hope the script resonates with those who write the checks. Albumology is a rough, tough, in-your-face potboiler about Nick, a passionate music writer/lover seeking to avenge the murder of his father. Not being that familiar with the artists dear to Nick's heart, I couldn't make the... read