"Snow" or, "Slipknot" or, "A Death Rewritten" is a story about an Atlanta man named David Jacobs who has unresolved... more
I received my MA in Liberal Studies from Dartmouth College in 1995. I specialized in Fine Arts (mostly drawing and painting but also some 3D conceptual pieces) and Creative Writing (mostly short fiction). I have a BFA degree in Communications Design (Ad...
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I received my MA in Liberal Studies from Dartmouth College in 1995. I specialized in Fine Arts (mostly drawing and painting but also some 3D conceptual pieces) and Creative Writing (mostly short fiction). I have a BFA degree in Communications Design (Ad Design) from Kutztown University of Pennsylvania. I write short fiction mostly although I have written some non-fiction, longer fiction and screen/teleplays. I have many projects in various stages of development. I am planning to apply to MFA programs (or possibly a PhD. program) in Fine Arts or Creative Writing. By the way, Dartmouth College has an excellent MA in Liberal Studies program that has a Creative Writing track for those interested in receiving a degree that is both rigorous and rewarding. The program at Dartmouth, while it has changed since I was a student, has become more "writer friendly" in recent years.
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A review of Dollfaceby email@example.com on 08/28/2009Mr. Wheeler's story is the start to a longer work. The beginning seemed more like it was part of her imagination than the supernatural. I am not sure I see the supernatural there at all. The second part merely hints at the possibility of the supernatural rather than anything concrete. I think the doll needs to be more of a character. Then you will really be going closer to... read
A review of A Dangerous Mindby firstname.lastname@example.org on 08/27/2009Mr. Garry's story is a good start to a longer work. I think that the story could go deeper into the main character's disturbed mind. Maybe include an internal monologue rant in his apartment. I am not sure if there is a chance for "hope" in his mind if he is killing like a machine or puppet especially if he is killing his friends and relatives. If there is a concept of right... read
A review of Clickety Clickby email@example.com on 08/27/2009I have no problem with experimental works but this seems more like a filmic, "Burgess-esque" character study than a story. I may be wrong but I got very little "story" from your submission. The writing obviously is unique in approach but there is little use in the way of explaining your little verbal "quirks". There are some punctuation errors and a few other problems from... read