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Aspiring filmmaker living in L.A.

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Reviews by thomastrace03 11

  • A review of History
    by thomastrace03 on 07/22/2014
    You’ve got a solid script. It’s one of the better ones I’ve read on this site. Your script is well written, fast-paced, concise and funny. There a few things I would change but overall it is good script. Your script is just as good as a typical romantic comedy you would see in the movies, which is kind of a good and bad thing to me. Probably the most important element of... read
  • A review of Robinson's Cruesoe
    by thomastrace03 on 07/21/2014
    I like the overall premise of your story. It is lighthearted and fun. I think your story also has a good message that most people would agree with – true happiness does not come from material things. I like the fact that Robinson, an extremely rich man, loses everything but finds true happiness while living on a deserted island. The premise and message of your script set the... read
  • A review of Horoscopes (r)
    by thomastrace03 on 05/16/2013
    I enjoyed reading your script. It was a fast read and kept me intrigued. The premise is high concept and probably has good market potential. I think the story, characters and dialogue could be further developed in order for this script to reach its maximum potential. A lot of “mosaic” type movies follow the same formula as your script – take a theme such as a holiday, concept,... read
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Comments About thomastrace03 4

  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 05/20/2013

    My apologies for the confusion. I did read the entire script, but there were a lot of notes I had down and I didn't want to overload you with too much. You have a lot to work with in your script that is good. You have a strong and active protagonist and a great theme of science versus religion, which is not easy to pull off. it is structurally sound. I'm sorry if i didn't make that point in the review. It's just a dense read as of now. I strongly believe it can get better there was just a lot going on. Hopefully there's enough in my review you can work on.

    Again apologies if it seemed vague.
  • jayelveejr on 05/16/2013

    Thank you for reading and reviewing Horoscopes, appreciate it and glad you enjoyed parts of it. Best of luck.

  • crossroads79 on 05/16/2013

    Thanks for the review of 'Lefty...' I appreciate your time and thoughts. In addressing the overal premise, the law states that whomever possesses the ticket is the winner, regardless who buys it. I remember a news story some years ago about this type of situation. A customer found a winning ticket in the trash of a restaurant and the establishment's owner/manager sued for a cut since it was on his 'property'. As for the rest of the story -- I knew this wasn't going to fly with everybody as you can see with the reviews. Thanks again and good luck to you.
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