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Aspiring filmmaker living in L.A....


Aspiring filmmaker living in L.A.

Submissions by thomastrace03

Reviews by thomastrace03 14

  • A review of Occasio
    by thomastrace03 on 08/12/2014
    I really enjoyed reading your script. It’s one of the better scripts on this site. You have a strong premise that you executed well. I think there are a few things you may want to consider changing to make the script even better. As I said, you have a strong premise. I love that you dealt with the subject of parallel universes. I am very intrigued by many subjects in theoretical... read
  • A review of House of Graves
    by thomastrace03 on 07/29/2014
    I enjoyed reading your script. You’ve got a lot of intriguing elements which gives your script a lot of potential. I could see this being made into a movie that I would really enjoy. I think there a few things that you could improve on to make your script even better. As I mentioned your script has a lot of intriguing elements – gangsters, rappers, strippers and a black market... read
  • A review of Robinson's Cruesoe
    by thomastrace03 on 07/21/2014
    I like the overall premise of your story. It is lighthearted and fun. I think your story also has a good message that most people would agree with – true happiness does not come from material things. I like the fact that Robinson, an extremely rich man, loses everything but finds true happiness while living on a deserted island. The premise and message of your script set the... read
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Comments About thomastrace03 9

  • mcmason on 08/12/2014

    You are very welcome.

    Best of luck to you!

    - Matt
  • nesw on 08/12/2014

    Thanks for the Occasio review. I did have an early draft that mentioned Hugh Everett, but I figured no one would understand he was a real physicist. Since I made up so much of the rest I decided it wasn't necessary in the end. Thanks again for the detailed notes.
  • Rfordyce on 08/12/2014

    It was truly a pleasure. I'm sure you can take it to the next level - good luck with it.

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