The Human strives to find life beyond his world, transcend his existence and develop a Theory Of Everything.
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Aspiring filmmaker living in L.A.
Submissions by thomastrace03
Reviews by thomastrace03 9
A review of Horoscopes (r)by thomastrace03 on 05/16/2013I enjoyed reading your script. It was a fast read and kept me intrigued. The premise is high concept and probably has good market potential. I think the story, characters and dialogue could be further developed in order for this script to reach its maximum potential. A lot of “mosaic” type movies follow the same formula as your script – take a theme such as a holiday, concept,... read
A review of Mr Hamilton's Bookshopby thomastrace03 on 07/09/2011Mr. Hamilton’s book shop was a very fun read. You have a great concept and a captivating plot. However, the story can be confusing and unclear at times. If you clear up the confusing elements of the story, I think you will have a solid script. Like I mentioned, your premise- a group of teenagers discover a magical bookshop where the books you read reveal the past and future... read
A review of How I Became A Gambling Manby thomastrace03 on 07/03/2011“How I Became a Gambling Man” is a lighthearted screwball comedy, which means that people will mainly base their assessment of this script on its’ humor. Unfortunately, I think the comedy in this script leaves a lot to be desired. The dialogue is not very witty, ironic, outrageous, etc. so it does not add much in terms of humor. The situational humor often times seems generic... read