timhan 

member since 03/30/2007 | last login 11/07/2009

Hiya! Feel free to contact me about anything I submit or any reviews, or anything else for that matter......

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Reviews by timhan 368

  • A review of The Doll (2nd Draft)
    by timhan on 11/14/2008
    This short story wasn't half bad. I think it has a lot of potential, but I did feel it was a bit too short. I also think for a horror story it could have done with a bit more gore perhaps, what about hearing the screams of the mother, etc.? I also felt that the daughter going back to bed wasn't really very realistic. I think I would have preferred the daughter to tell her... read
  • A review of 3
    by timhan on 03/19/2008
    The shots on the sofa were way too static and the acting needed work. Also, the music didn't fit the piece too well. Finally the script on the whole was way too predictable and I think you should of got someone else to read it and give you feedback. Hmm, that doesn't too positive so sorry for the negative comments.
  • A review of Distance
    by timhan on 03/19/2008
    this really did drag on. It was far too much of a talky, and although it looked nice enough it just didn't seem to fulfill it potential. The ending was a total let down, and really the short didn't go anywhere, which is a shame as it did have potential, but the script really did need a lot more work. Anyway, thanks for uploading.
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Comments About timhan 23

  • blueboy on 11/14/2008

    Thanks for reading Past Life and posting the review.
  • desisingh53 on 03/09/2008

    Thanks Timhan!

    Your review is greatly appreciated and I will consider your suggestions on CONTRACT KILLERS.
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/05/2008

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