uLindokuhle 

member since 08/08/2011 | last login 08/09/2012

I'm a 20 year old South African with a passion for telling stories....

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I'm a 20 year old South African with a passion for telling stories.

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Reviews by uLindokuhle 6

  • A review of Fixed Shadows (r)
    by uLindokuhle on 08/30/2011
    Okay, first things first, well done of writing your screenplay. Now to business, I didn't care at all for your characters. With so many dying, it became very important to be invested in the characters. I think that this was because they were so inconsitent. Granted, they spent most of the screenplay pretensing to be someone but it just didn't work for me. Secondly, I found... read
  • A review of Hunger
    by uLindokuhle on 08/27/2011
    I really enjoyed the screenplay! Every page, I was excited for more. The narative was exactly brand new but that is the case with most of them. I'm not sure if this is a compliment or an insult but I found myself laughing and entertained more by your descriptions than anything else! The tome was excellent. I really felt comfortable with the story, again, being a thriller... read
  • A review of Lack of Direction
    by uLindokuhle on 08/14/2011
    You are a very capable writer. I liked your dailogue and your style. There were some structural problems but here is my biggest issue; you didn't have a story. I felt like you had an idea but you just didn't have a story. Think about good movies, if you breakdown the plot, you discover that there is a songle concept, idea or event that sets the action in motion. Everything... read
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Comments About uLindokuhle 4

  • love32 on 09/07/2011

    Hi, My name is Mary, sincere,friendly and open minded girl,seeking for a serious and honest relationship, good relationships are based on trust and honesty, I am interested in you for honest relationship. Please contact me on my private e-mail address.(mary.dokie@yahoo.com)so that i will tell you more about myself and my pictures also. Remember the distance,age or color does not matter, but love matters a lot in life.I believe we can move from here!
  • Gary Mark Lee on 08/16/2011

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  • Anthony J. on 08/15/2011

    Thanks you for your review. You are the second person to tell me to limit the locations. Guess that's on the top of the list for a re-write.
    Glad you enjoyed it.
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