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I'm a 20 year old South African with a passion for telling stories....
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I'm a 20 year old South African with a passion for telling stories.
Reviews by uLindokuhle 6
A review of Fixed Shadows (r)by uLindokuhle on 08/30/2011Okay, first things first, well done of writing your screenplay. Now to business, I didn't care at all for your characters. With so many dying, it became very important to be invested in the characters. I think that this was because they were so inconsitent. Granted, they spent most of the screenplay pretensing to be someone but it just didn't work for me. Secondly, I found... read
A review of Hungerby uLindokuhle on 08/27/2011I really enjoyed the screenplay! Every page, I was excited for more. The narative was exactly brand new but that is the case with most of them. I'm not sure if this is a compliment or an insult but I found myself laughing and entertained more by your descriptions than anything else! The tome was excellent. I really felt comfortable with the story, again, being a thriller... read
A review of Lack of Directionby uLindokuhle on 08/14/2011You are a very capable writer. I liked your dailogue and your style. There were some structural problems but here is my biggest issue; you didn't have a story. I felt like you had an idea but you just didn't have a story. Think about good movies, if you breakdown the plot, you discover that there is a songle concept, idea or event that sets the action in motion. Everything... read