unionjacker 

member since 12/05/2002 | last login 06/11/2006

Writer/ Director/ Editor/ Script Analyst__ 1st Place Best Spoof for Nerd Wars at 19th Annual Dragon Con Short film Fest 2002_ Download One Minute Trailer at_ http://nerdwars.tripod.com ___ Script Analyst Pacific Entertainment Group, CALIFORNIA. __________________________________ Nerdwars is a 16 minute, 16mm...

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Writer/ Director/ Editor/ Script Analyst__ 1st Place Best Spoof for Nerd Wars at 19th Annual Dragon Con Short film Fest 2002_ Download One Minute Trailer at_ http://nerdwars.tripod.com ___ Script Analyst Pacific Entertainment Group, CALIFORNIA. __________________________________ Nerdwars is a 16 minute, 16mm short shot around Miami Beach ______________ NERD WARS___________________________________ Three Trekkies, Captain Kirk, Scotty, and a female Spock try to blow up George Lucas at a Star Wars Convention. Only Jerry, a 27 year old Jedi-wannabe still living with his dad, his plastic lightsaber and toy yoda doll can save Lucas.

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  • A review of PRIDE OF LYONS
    by unionjacker on 06/16/2004
    Professionaly written with lots of attention to detail, however, structurally you're in dire need of various things. One is a mid act complication. Once Danny agrees to the job, there's no conflict for him other than a few scenes of embarassment. It needs different levels of conflict. It's also lacking a more active antagonist. Bryce hardly does anything in terms of placing... read
  • A review of My Mother's Wedding
    by unionjacker on 06/15/2004
    The structure is tight for the most part using the usual expected conventions in a romantic comedy and while the dialogue is okay it lacks some punch. The tone is cute with no real laughs and few memorable moments like the Air Hockey scene. Nina's character is passive until the "meet" which is long overdue at page 46 and the title of the screenplay or the wedding doesn't fit... read
  • by unionjacker on 06/11/2004
    I love the idea for Nisha carrying around all those memories, that she can't remember who she is, until she finds Michael. But to get her to Micheal was too coincidental. In fact the script was full of coincidences. From the Martini Woman at the bar who happens to run over Alyson, to her daughter ending in London where both Nisha and Michael happen to be, where their paths... read
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