Short Story Author and Poet. I'm currently working on a new novella called Waken Dream and a novel-in-progress called Drageons....
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Short Story Author and Poet. I'm currently working on a new novella called Waken Dream and a novel-in-progress called Drageons.
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A review of The Secrets We Don't Sayby Velvet_Whispers on 06/07/2009There are times in our life when we wish we could say everything that we keep inside, when we wish to feel alive, but life is so hectic that half the time we are merely just running around in circles. But then we take walks outside, push the world aside and think back on what just transpired. Sometimes, we need to think on our own, but sometimes, we could also find comfort... read
A review of Forever and a Dayby Velvet_Whispers on 02/11/2009There is a lot of potential for this screenplay, and I liked Brayden's character. He is definitely someone that we could relate to. Is there existence, meaning after high school? If there were fewer characters in this screenplay, the storyline would be a lot tighter. I liked the dynamics between Justin and Miriam and Brayden and Kelly. This alone could stand on its own,... read
A review of Scam (Redraft)by Velvet_Whispers on 02/06/2009Don't get me wrong. I loved Vantage Point and movies and tv shows like the Nine that split up the storyline and have multiple characters, but like with Vantage Point, toward the end I'm even shouting, "Again!" How many vantage points to one story? The explosion was cool, though. I was thrilled to read this screenplay. Like I said before, I love stories such as these, but... read