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  karlasbryant on 04/14/2012

  Thanks very much for your review of my short story, "Not My Secret to Tell". Yes, Mr. Hunt is the one who gets killed. I've been trying hard to not write too much "on the nose" and may have ended up making the ending more ambiguous than I'd meant to. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
  And the "Denny" instead of "Danny" typo is driving me crazy! :)
  
  Thanks again,
  Karla
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  f-ceska on 03/31/2012

  Hi Jennifer,
  
  I'm glad to see you enjoyed 'The Gospel of Michael' (and especially as I know you come from a Christian background, it's good that you didn't find it 'offensive' as some others may have done. Not that it's meant to be - obviously Michael is intended to be a good man, just not a very good priest.) Now you've read two of the Gospel series (though in the wrong order) and hopefully you'll be assigned some more because it would be nice to hear how you see them all coming together!
  
  Thank you also for spotting those typos - proves I'm not infallible. I'll correct those!
  
  Very busy with my other commitments at the moment, but hopefully I'll find time to start reading a few more stories soon and will hope to get another of yours.
  
  Take care,
  Francesca
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  Mike Wolfson on 03/30/2012

  Hi Jenni - Thank you for the kind review of Fantasies.
  
  A good writer...it's a complient I'll gladly take, but trust me, I'm no better a writer than anyone else here.
  
  Good luck with your own work.
  
  Mike

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  karlasbryant on 04/14/2012

  Thanks very much for your review of my short story, "Not My Secret to Tell". Yes, Mr. Hunt is the one who gets killed. I've been trying hard to not write too much "on the nose" and may have ended up making the ending more ambiguous than I'd meant to. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
  And the "Denny" instead of "Danny" typo is driving me crazy! :)
  
  Thanks again,
  Karla
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  f-ceska on 03/31/2012

  Hi Jennifer,
  
  I'm glad to see you enjoyed 'The Gospel of Michael' (and especially as I know you come from a Christian background, it's good that you didn't find it 'offensive' as some others may have done. Not that it's meant to be - obviously Michael is intended to be a good man, just not a very good priest.) Now you've read two of the Gospel series (though in the wrong order) and hopefully you'll be assigned some more because it would be nice to hear how you see them all coming together!
  
  Thank you also for spotting those typos - proves I'm not infallible. I'll correct those!
  
  Very busy with my other commitments at the moment, but hopefully I'll find time to start reading a few more stories soon and will hope to get another of yours.
  
  Take care,
  Francesca
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  Mike Wolfson on 03/30/2012

  Hi Jenni - Thank you for the kind review of Fantasies.
  
  A good writer...it's a complient I'll gladly take, but trust me, I'm no better a writer than anyone else here.
  
  Good luck with your own work.
  
  Mike
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  benito2 on 03/26/2012

  Hi V,
  I’m from Mali (West Africa). Now I’m not an active supporter… But my friends are divided between Manchester United and Arsenal.
  Thank you for asking, and thank you again for your feedback!
  
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  KSisk90 on 03/22/2012

  Sure, happy to help.
  
  I thought that it may of been a language thing with george, but wasn't sure.
  
  Thanks for briefing me on the end of the story. Sorry I admit I'm actually pretty bad with names in movies / stories.
  9 / 10 times I'll go through a movie and never know the main character's name. lol
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  KSisk90 on 03/17/2012

  Thank you for your kind words about my story.
  
  Tyrone Allen is a purely fictional character that I had thought up for the story who could show the message that I wanted to share. So the name is just a coincidence.
  
  Ill start doing something in the writing to distinguish a persons thoughts, thanks for the advice. Do you think 'marks' would be adequate to show it is a thought?
  
  Also, I had originally wanted to refer to Tyrone as "Ty" at the beginning of the story, and later reveal. But I thought people would see "Ty" and automatically think it was a black name, so I decided against it. What do you think?
  
  Thanks again for reviewing my story, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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  gulfcoastomega on 03/17/2012

  Hi V,
  Greetings from the colonies.
  Thank you for taking the time to give my story a read.
  Comments/thoughts much apprecisted!
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  KSisk90 on 03/13/2012

  Hrm there isnt a private message type feature on this site is there?
  
  Ex: The next thing I knew, my grandmother was stood in the office, on her crutches.
  
  I might of said: The next thing I knew, my grandmother was standing in the office, on her crutches.
  
  "was stood" just seems a little off to me.
  
  And it is true, I do see how putting your mind into the game and concentrating could be a beneficial thing. Exercise is great stress relief after all. As well as pride you get in doing something well, which is a mood booster.
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  kashan on 03/10/2012

  Thanks for reviewing Fire In The City.
  This is my first submission and you are its first reviewer! Thanks again.
  
  I have noted the mistakes, corrected them.
  "But here’s the trap of absurdity, if this feels like a
  dream, then an instant can be a lifetime or more." - dreams are timeless. defining an instant in a dream could mean the same as defining a lifetime. I don't know if it still makes sense but for whatever its worth...
  
  It is Leh (in India), the lake, moon and even the fire. One of the most beautiful places on Earth. You must visit.
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  Mike Wolfson on 03/09/2012

  Hi, to answer your question:
  
  

  vieira4 wrote:

  (Can I ask you a question? At what point in the story did you work out that it was him?)

  
  
  I didn't know for certain until the end. I had my suspicion that if it was a domestic UK player it had to be him. However, the possibility was there that it could have been an overseas player looking for a few extra games while he was banned.
  
  Take care - Mike

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