A local religious correspondent is intrigued by two men's shared paranormal experience.
30 year old, Christian, socialist football fan. Have been writing all my life. I usually write about football, sometimes explicitly, other time subtly....
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30 year old, Christian, socialist football fan. Have been writing all my life. I usually write about football, sometimes explicitly, other time subtly.
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A review of Mrs. Yardleyby vieira4 on 07/16/2012Thanks for uploading this story. You got so much emotion and passion into five pages! I sense that English is a language you have learned (although you've learned it very well). Therefore there are a few small mistakes. You're supposed to write numbers below 100 in words (9/nine). "short brown hair till neck" - short brown hair falling to her neck. "that time, which I subconsciously... read
A review of Black Molassesby vieira4 on 04/14/2012Wow... I have to admit, I had to skim quite a bit of the end, taking in enough details to understand what was going on without focusing too hard, or I, like the protagonist, would have been sick. Ugh. I don't know how you came up with this :D Having said all that, your writing is excellent. I didn't spot any mistakes. I loved your description of Carlucci and his home, and... read
A review of Not My Secret to Tellby vieira4 on 04/14/2012Time flew by while I was reading this. You have a real gift for keeping the reader engaged. I take it the couple had decided to kill Mr Hunt? That's what I took from the mildly ambiguous ending. If that's what you meant, it doesn't require clarification. I saw one mistake; on page 9, you wrote 'Denny' instead of Danny. I'm sure you've noticed, so don't worry about re-uploading... read