A fifteen-year-old schoolgirl makes friends, and more-than-friends.
31 year old, Christian, socialist football fan. Have been writing all my life. I usually write about football, sometimes explicitly, other times subtly....
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31 year old, Christian, socialist football fan. Have been writing all my life. I usually write about football, sometimes explicitly, other times subtly.
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A review of Rafter J Ranchingby vieira4 on 06/11/2013Hi. I know nothing about farms, tractors and cows, but I enjoyed this tale: by the end, I was really into it, wanting to know what would happen to the rancher next. Highlights: I like having 'Ed' at the start of every sentence about him: I like the rhythm this creates. I also liked the juxtaposition between his slowness and his apparent rashness when irritated. I laughed at... read
A review of Smarter Than A Smartphoneby vieira4 on 06/10/2013Thanks for sharing 'Smarter Than A Smartphone'. I thoroughly enjoyed this - very much a zeitgeist piece. Mr Walker initially appears to be a conniving, lazy character attempting to gain maximum reward for minimum effort, but over time, the true extent of his genius becomes clear. I love the conclusion - I was expecting the protagonist to succeed, but I wasn't expecting him... read
A review of The Rebellious Sonby vieira4 on 06/08/2013I really liked this story. I worked out what the creature was on about page 2, which was the perfect length of time as far as I am concerned. I don't like obvious stories, and I don't like those that feel as if they have been written for an intellectual elite. You obviously researched this well and know a lot about mediaeval myths. I know absolutely nothing about any of this,... read