An introverted navigator must return a female android to a crime lord, but falls for her in the race home.
Wrote my first screenplay in 2008/2009. 'Omega Complex' is my second, written in 2010. Eager to learn and improve :)...
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Wrote my first screenplay in 2008/2009. 'Omega Complex' is my second, written in 2010. Eager to learn and improve :)
Reviews by vikingwarrior 17
A review of Dragons Of Resentby vikingwarrior on 09/26/2011Hi Karl, I feel like the meat of this story is the relationship between Genevieve and Peing-La. In my opinion, everything else should be a backdrop to that and an antagonist to the relationship. Genevieve's reason for coming to China is unclear. We know why she was summoned, but why does she agree to go. What's missing in her life back home? What is her burning want? As... read
A review of Cold Lake In Winterby vikingwarrior on 09/26/2011Overall I would say great writing, but the story wasn't one for me. I'm not a fan of this genre and if I were to be drawn in, it would have to be by an original take and extremely intriguing characters. I didn't feel you had either of those, but what kept me reading was a friendly writing style. Your screenplay was elemental and at times I felt like I was back in a Cormac McCarthy... read
A review of Heavy Gravityby vikingwarrior on 09/17/2011Firstly, you are a great writer and you conjure up some incredible visuals. That being said, I found this difficult to read. Normally I will get through a screenplay in an hour or so, but I found myself having to take long breaks every block of pages. The reason? You overly describe. As a result the screenplay becomes a labour to read and after 30 pages I felt like I had read... read