An introverted navigator must return a female android to a crime lord, but falls for her in the race home.
Wrote my first screenplay in 2008/2009. 'Omega Complex' is my second, written in 2010. Eager to learn and improve :)...
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Wrote my first screenplay in 2008/2009. 'Omega Complex' is my second, written in 2010. Eager to learn and improve :)
Reviews by vikingwarrior 17
A review of Cold Lake In Winterby vikingwarrior on 09/26/2011Overall I would say great writing, but the story wasn't one for me. I'm not a fan of this genre and if I were to be drawn in, it would have to be by an original take and extremely intriguing characters. I didn't feel you had either of those, but what kept me reading was a friendly writing style. Your screenplay was elemental and at times I felt like I was back in a Cormac McCarthy... read
A review of Heavy Gravityby vikingwarrior on 09/17/2011Firstly, you are a great writer and you conjure up some incredible visuals. That being said, I found this difficult to read. Normally I will get through a screenplay in an hour or so, but I found myself having to take long breaks every block of pages. The reason? You overly describe. As a result the screenplay becomes a labour to read and after 30 pages I felt like I had read... read
A review of In Human Formby vikingwarrior on 09/05/2011I read this in one sitting. That's easy to do when the dialogue is so engaging, the scenes so well crafted and the plight of our characters so clearly presented. I think you are an excellent writer. Not so certain I 'enjoyed' the story. I found it difficult to relate to some of the characters and their insistence to put their faith in God, against such a harsh world. That,... read