villaaro
member since 10/25/2006 |
last login 10/27/2006
I am an actor, stuntman, and movie lover. I love to read and critique scripts....
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I am an actor, stuntman, and movie lover. I love to read and critique scripts.
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Reviews by villaaro 4
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A review of Peanut Butter and Jellyby villaaro on 10/27/2006I love peanut butter and jelly so I really connected with the lead actor! Camera work was great! Actors were great! "special effects were great! The lighting was a bit flat and bland. The over all film could have used some color correction to even out the entire look. I loved the story and the actors so the technical stuff wasn't as glaring. Nice job and good luck. -
A review of The Aquariumby villaaro on 10/27/2006Very very funny. Story and characters really helped this film out. The films pace and timing were perfect setting me up nicely for the "punch"line! Some of the transitions were a bit awkward. Especially when the tough guy comes into the scene and walks in fron t of the camera and it cross fades. it could have been a bit sharper if he crosses into the close up frame and... read
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A review of Cliche Manby villaaro on 10/25/2006This looks likes a first time effort at making a film. Which is certainly not a bad thing! Script and dialogue were OK but the editing and most of the framing distracting me from the content of thim film. The idea was interesting but technically it was lacking and that took away from the twist at the end. Practice some lighting and photography and get a stronger romantic... read
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