a screenplay
by wildandfree74
To bring peace back to Heaven, a fallen Archangel must find a way to return home.
wildandfree74
member since 12/09/2007 |
last login 02/26/2012
I find humor envisioning "what could go wrong here to make me laugh." Like someone drinking coffee in a car and suddenly, the airbag goes off in their face. I have that kind of imagination....
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I find humor envisioning "what could go wrong here to make me laugh." Like someone drinking coffee in a car and suddenly, the airbag goes off in their face. I have that kind of imagination.
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Reviews by wildandfree74 21
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A review of Of Wolf and Manby wildandfree74 on 06/04/2009I enjoyed the script throughout, I must say, even though we are a bit slow in the beginning, we had good clean “boys being boys” humor and testosterone. I am an avid outdoorsman so I was excited to receive this assignment. Being such, I will mention what I question. First off, you have a wonderfully small cast. These characters are very different in description, but too similar... read -
A review of The Night Country (Rev.)by wildandfree74 on 05/10/2008I was impressed at the over-all formatting and descriptive nature of the script. You did a fine job as a screen writer there, obviously, you are not new to formatting. I would suggest a few less parentheticals though. Structure wise, you are not far off but the story line is lacking details that drive me nuts. For instance, I was lost regarding the old man until I began to... read
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A review of The Last Buffaloby wildandfree74 on 01/21/2008Let me start by saying that I really enjoyed this story. Your screenplay was well written but there are some un-necessary descriptions and a few grammatical errors, missing words, that need to be corrected. For example, you could state on page one “Progress has just passed the old world” by someone like Billy. Or on page four, Billy could state “It is a sad image of lost things.”... read
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Once I started I could not stop until the end. Great blend of espionage, super natural, and politics, like three movies. I have to admit I did have to keep up with the pace.
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Hey Chris. I thought Perennial was a great piece. I "I Liked" it on FaceBook
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Yeah, I've got some babies, so hopefully the mac and cheese will pay off someday. But I learn something new every script myself.
+ more commentsjohnnyrussell on 07/12/2010
Just dot those "I's" and cross the "T's" I pointed out and the YA crowd will eat it up, I know I did.
johnnyrussell on 07/11/2010
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