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A beginner. In short-a knob. Just trying to learn how to finish something I start....
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A beginner. In short-a knob. Just trying to learn how to finish something I start.
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A review of A Constant Variableby xego on 07/28/2009Hello, Just finished reading “A Constant Variable” and I thought it was a tight, well written script. The approach I take in doing these reviews is I imagine I am in a position to look at spec scripts and decide whether to green light, or what changes to ask for ECT. A script that takes on time travel or any other theoretical science has my respect because right off the bat... read
A review of Snow or, Slipknot or, A Death Rewrittenby xego on 07/26/2009Hello, Just finished reading your story and wanted to give a few comments on it. I really liked the format, and the idea of events playing out in reverse. The first few news blurbs seemed a bit problematic to me. They just didn’t completely sound authentic. The purpose being to convey as much as possible with as few words as possible, I don’t think they yet meet this standard... read
A review of The Janitorby xego on 07/23/2009Hello, Just finished reading “The janitor” and wanted to comment on it. To me this script seemed to have potential. It is a quick read at 94 pages. Ordinarily I would say that is great, but in this case you may need to add a few scenes. I will go more into what I didn’t think worked and why additional scenes might help, but I wanted to point out what I really liked about the... read