xego 

member since 07/07/2009 | last login 12/07/2009

A beginner. In short-a knob. Just trying to learn how to finish something I start....

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A beginner. In short-a knob. Just trying to learn how to finish something I start.

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Reviews by xego 9

  • A review of A Constant Variable
    by xego on 07/28/2009
    Hello, Just finished reading “A Constant Variable” and I thought it was a tight, well written script. The approach I take in doing these reviews is I imagine I am in a position to look at spec scripts and decide whether to green light, or what changes to ask for ECT. A script that takes on time travel or any other theoretical science has my respect because right off the bat... read
  • by xego on 07/26/2009
    Hello, Just finished reading your story and wanted to give a few comments on it. I really liked the format, and the idea of events playing out in reverse. The first few news blurbs seemed a bit problematic to me. They just didn’t completely sound authentic. The purpose being to convey as much as possible with as few words as possible, I don’t think they yet meet this standard... read
  • A review of The Janitor
    by xego on 07/23/2009
    Hello, Just finished reading “The janitor” and wanted to comment on it. To me this script seemed to have potential. It is a quick read at 94 pages. Ordinarily I would say that is great, but in this case you may need to add a few scenes. I will go more into what I didn’t think worked and why additional scenes might help, but I wanted to point out what I really liked about the... read
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Comments About xego 3

  • whoisguerrero on 07/23/2009

    Thanks for your insightful review of The Janitor. You have some really interesting ideas. Just to answer your question, Lucio has details about the plan not because he heard one conversation, but because he has been listening to multiple (off screen) phone conversations from the beginning. It may not have been clear to you, but he's bugged some phone lines and is constantly listening. Perhaps I should add a scene of him bugging the line. Also, being the janitor, he would have access to various rooms, files, addresses, etc. And yes, he probably has some military training.
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/14/2009

    Xego,

    Thank you for your review. I have gotten some input on a similar wavelength. I think that you hit the nail on the head. When I rewrite and make changes, I will definately take your input into account.

    DL
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/12/2009

    Xego ~ Thanks for reading and reviewing TEN MILES OF BAD ROAD. I appreciate your time and energy, and your detailed analysis. And welcome to TriggerStreet. I hope you have a good time here. Take care, and have a great day. Tom

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