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Disposed

A review of L19: Disposed

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

This had a great look and feel to it which made it unique. You're obviously very talented and deserve to do well. I wasn't quite sure what to make of this film though as there didn't appear to be any real character development or narrative. Essentially we see an android avoid death then get killed, and to be honest if you hadn't told me it was an android in the synopsis I probably... read

Great!

A review of Backfire

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

A simple idea that worked. Well directed and cut to exactly the right length. You built up tension well. As there wasn't much happening it meant everything rested on the ending, and fortunately it didn't dissapoint. It was surprising, dark and comic. It also left me wanting to see more of your films. Well done.

Pointless

A review of Mixed Messages

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

This one really wasn't for me I'm afraid. I didn't get it on any level. The film had nothing to do with mixed messages - it was just some guy being (an unrealistic) idiot who gets slapped. There didn't appear to be any hidden message beneath the surface or any real point to the film. The acting was terrible (particularly the guy), and the dialogue was awful - when have you... read

Exceptionally well directed

A review of The Identical Humanity

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

I thought this was beautifully directed and some of the cuts were inspired. The actor did what was asked of him and the music worked well too. Your synopsis drew me in but unfortunately the film didn't live up to its billing. This is because it lacked a strong through line -a story. I also felt that was a very cliched view of twenty-first century life and neither challenged... read

Huh?

A review of Threshold

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

I didn't understand this at all. As far as I could tell a woman eats an orange, decides not to commit suicide, then flattens a ring? That's three events rather than a narrative. I was so lost that I had no idea how I was supposed to feel at the end. It's a real pity too as some of this was beautifully shot and the cinematography and costume were great. Next time I'd concentrate... read

Honest to Death

A review of Honest to Death

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

This well directed, there were some nice comic touches and the acting was ok too. The scene around the campfire was nice but too long. After the first death there was a real lull in the middle because we were just waiting for the others to be killed. Because of this the story failed to build intrigue (it picked up at the end again though). As a comedy horror this ought to... read

Fair

A review of The Baseball

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

This was a good effort; there were some nice shots in there, and the ending was a neat surprise. You could have done with a cinematographer as it felt very much like a student film. Also it was far too long - if you chopped it in half it would have much more punch. The script was dialogue heavy and there was too much exposition - the characters didn't have ordinary conversations... read

Middle of the road

A review of Middle Ol' Me

by y0211745 on 10/20/2010

This had a good pace to it, there were some lovely cuts in there and the acting was solid. Unfortunately the subject matter didn't really grab me. I wasn't sure why I should care about this story or even what it was trying to tell me about the difficulties of being a middle child. It was hardly groundbreaking or surprising. Technically this shows promise, but I'd avoid including... read

That's what happens...when a God is born

A review of Birth of a God

by y0211745 on 10/19/2010

This was nicely edited and the sound was good. It won't win any prizes for cinematography or shot composition as most of it seems to have been ripped from the internet. The film is built on a thought that popped into the directors head reather than a premise, and it kind of works. You got your point across but it was all a bit self indulgent, and I don't think there is ever... read

Nicely done

A review of Under the Bridge

by y0211745 on 10/19/2010

This was an interesting little film. I enjoyed the stuff about trolls at the beginning, but the shift into the story about the deceased man near your home seemed a little cumbersome. I think the film would've had more impact if you'd made one point about this man's death. For example people removing the flowers was interesting, as was what you were saying about the mans character... read

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