A scientist believes he has created an indestructible body, until he is sent back through time by his mentor.
BFA - Film Studies. BCOMM - Accounting (Financial Services). Producer, Director, Writer, Accountant. Warmest Regards, _B....
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BFA - Film Studies. BCOMM - Accounting (Financial Services). Producer, Director, Writer, Accountant. Warmest Regards, _B.
Reviews by YBU 32
A review of Reunionby YBU on 05/21/2012I enjoyed the tension between the two old friends. Those little moments of dominance and friendly sniping at each other's competence was realistic and engaging. The embarrassment of the Doctor was thorough and ever escalating. Classic comedy. Take a person of integrity and have them totally fail, ever increasing their humiliation to completely exaggerated ends. I must... read
A review of The Roomby YBU on 05/17/2012Errors... Page 11, routine, not routing Page 12, need a paragraph break at “Weeks” Page 13, it’s coma, not comma. Bottom of 13, financially, not financial Page 14, “It was a rock group…” Character... I would say that Jake is a fair outline for a character. A caricature, even. A real estate agent who is suffering from alcohol or drug abuse and who feels pity for himself... read
A review of The Ferryby YBU on 05/13/2012Short stories in general can often contain a unique voice, provide key life lessons/a moral, metaphors that extend a theme, or just a good old fashioned twist ending. A punchline, in comedic terms. This is the first short story I've read that contained a proper twist ending. I liked it. The writing was a bit muddled and hard to follow at times. I did not feel like I was... read