ydnar600 

member since 11/21/2002 | last login 09/28/2014

A 2014 Bluecat Screenplay Contest Semifinalist for the script "Better to Dance..." which was reviewed on this site. I grew up in Dallas Texas in a wonderful lower-middle class family in a wonderful lower-middle class black neighborhood. At age 11 I was...

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A 2014 Bluecat Screenplay Contest Semifinalist for the script "Better to Dance..." which was reviewed on this site. I grew up in Dallas Texas in a wonderful lower-middle class family in a wonderful lower-middle class black neighborhood. At age 11 I was forced to move to a small town in East Texas: Mt. Pleasant. I attended the University of Texas at Austin and graduated in 1992. I currently am a Business Analyst for an Austin consulting firm.

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Reviews by ydnar600 125

  • A review of Truth in Advertising
    by ydnar600 on 09/27/2014
    Overall, a pretty good script. One of the breeziest reads I’ve ever had on this site. That said, my critiques have to do with the derivative nature and lack of stakes in your story. Concept: I’ve seen this before in any number of movies. that’s not a knock, per se, but I don’t believe you brought anything new to this romantic dramedy. Dialogue: Generally pretty good. The... read
  • A review of Artificial
    by ydnar600 on 09/26/2014
    Overall, quite a good script. It was a pleasure to just read the script on its own merits and not have to constantly stop and critique. That said, I do have some critiques and a good number of them center around only reading your story once. Unfortunately, once is all you have in most scenarios of getting your script potentially made. You have, however, made a good impression... read
  • A review of Serial Killers
    by ydnar600 on 09/24/2014
    Notes follow as I read: Page 60 you have Jeffrey asking you didn't? But you need to be detailed in who he's talking to I don't understand this whole exchange with Lucy from page 60 to 61. The characters have weird reactions to things that are happening to them There's a lot of screaming in the script you’re missing the connective tissue in your action/description of events... read
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Comments About ydnar600 42

  • Russ2007 on 09/27/2014

    Thanks for reading Serial Killers and the notes. These will be useful in the rewrite. Appreciated.
  • nesw on 09/24/2014

    Thanks for the review of Dry Creek Road. I appreciate the notes.
  • Russ2007 on 07/18/2014

    Just want to say thanks for reading Anna & The Magic Mirror, and the notes. These will be useful in the rewrite. Appreciated.
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