A bio-mechanical gladiator considers the price of freedom.
Curtains was published by Justin McLachlan’s Boxfire Press. Another as yet untitled short story will be published in the Boxfire Press anthology ‘Red’ later this year. The King of Rowdy Creek was published in Line Zero. My screenplay Chicks & Ammo was...
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Curtains was published by Justin McLachlan’s Boxfire Press. Another as yet untitled short story will be published in the Boxfire Press anthology ‘Red’ later this year. The King of Rowdy Creek was published in Line Zero. My screenplay Chicks & Ammo was optioned by Angel Devil Productions, producers of Missing in America starring Danny Glover and David Strathairn. My screenplay based on Twelve Twelve Twelve is being made into a short film by Triggerstreet member FilmSail (John Sheetz of Sail Away Pictures). Info on the project here: http://bulletin.triggerstreet.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=54785&highlight.
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A review of Dargonby YeahHi on 03/01/2011What a great horror piece with great descriptions and an interesting take on a social issue! Good line: as if it was lit to signify the beginning of some unnatural event I like the use of this word: orgiastic. Most people would have used orgasmic to lesser effect. Great visual: both letting the bead strands part over their bodies and rake over their faces. Good tension... read
A review of Red Left Handby YeahHi on 02/26/2011I love this character. His flights into imagination are poetic and funny. Your writing is very strong. Captain Blood is a great name for that drink. The beach sequence he imagines, and your telling of it is GORGEOUS. Also, this: “he squints and stares at it, watching to see if size 10 footprints suddenly appear crossing the sand toward the tide.” I wondered if the world... read
A review of Organic Matterby YeahHi on 02/25/2011Yeech! I’m never eating oatmeal again. This is a great premise for a character and I could see it expanded to a horror script. I think you write well and did a disgustingly effective job describing the bacteria. You might show more of his reaction to what he’s seeing. He seems really calm cooking the oatmeal and that disoriented me. He, at that point, should be reacting... read