zorko 

member since 11/11/2002 | last login 04/21/2011

I made the move from Sin City to Los Angeles in hopes to puruse my career in the entertainment industry. For someone who has never been to the LA area, this is defiantely a culture shock. I've always said that those who...

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I made the move from Sin City to Los Angeles in hopes to puruse my career in the entertainment industry. For someone who has never been to the LA area, this is defiantely a culture shock. I've always said that those who denounce your dreams never acheived theirs. It's about time to live my dream.

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Reviews by zorko 11

  • zorko
    Refreshing Credited Review
    A review of Sam, Roscoe & Her
    by zorko on 11/16/2007
    It’s very refreshing to se such colorful characters and an original story line. I’m impressed with your ability to describe yet captivate. I look for more from you, or a more elaborate version of this story. Some constructive criticism is that I felt as if you depended too much on “He” and that lost the narration feel of the story. If you could involve his name more or... read
  • zorko
    smooth story Non Credited Review
    A review of The Fall
    by zorko on 12/17/2002
    I think you did a good job with this story and the contrast between the banker and society. I actually enjoyed reading this story and hope that you have more of the same in the future. My only criticism is that I think the dialogue can still be more refined and tighter.

Comments About zorko 2

  • Jones25
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    Jones25 on 08/01/2009

    Thanks for your review of the garden. I agreed with most of your criticisms, and I'll factor them into the rewrite. Cheers Ewan
  • jwest
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    jwest on 11/16/2007

    Cheers for that - review of No. 12. Greatly appreciated and relieved you liked ;D

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